Originally posted by mcrowder I can't read this at all and get past "as they deliver (plural verb) and steps (singular verb - same subject)". Sounds like something my 1st grader would be embarrassed to turn in.
Heck, I go "tilt" well before that: "their right foot"???
A communal right foot?
A three-legged race?
Choose one: "their right feet" or "his/her right foot"