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Old Wed Feb 16, 2005, 11:50am
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Originally posted by mcrowder
I can't read this at all and get past "as they deliver (plural verb) and steps (singular verb - same subject)". Sounds like something my 1st grader would be embarrassed to turn in.
Heck, I go "tilt" well before that: "their right foot"???

A communal right foot?
A three-legged race?

Choose one: "their right feet" or "his/her right foot"
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