Please Help ...

[BillyMac]

Originally Posted by just another ref

Hard to believe you didn't include any pictures.

[BillyMac]

I've posted this on other forums. I wanted to get as much input as possible.

Let the games begin.

[walter]

Originally Posted by BillyMac

I've posted this on other forums. I wanted to get as much input as possible.

Let the games begin.

BillyMac: I really like it! I am still going through but on first pass, in the next to last paragraph, you have the word "chard" instead of "charged". Spell checker would have missed this so I thought I'd help you out.

[BillyMac]

Originally Posted by walter

In the next to last paragraph, you have the word "chard" instead of "charged". Spell checker would have missed this so I thought I'd help you out.

Now why didn't you think chard belonged there? Haven't you ever heard of Swiss Chard? Obviously spell checker must be a gardener.

Thanks. I will correct it in my final draft.

[SCalScoreKeeper]

Well done BillyMac! I hope the officials in your unit find this as good a read as I did.

[mbyron]

Can you shorten it to 25 words?

Or maybe add an anecdote. It's a little dry.

[BillyMac]

Originally Posted by mbyron

Add an anecdote. It's a little dry.

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