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Interesting stuff. Since we're suggesting edits, the subject seems to be missing in this sentence. |
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Your Trent Tucker paragraph seems odd since it doesn't follow the format of the rest. All other paragraphs start with the name of the player in the first sentence
Perhaps some intro like below would keep the paragraphs more consistent-- While most rule influencers are household names and hall of famers, Trent Tucker (Minnesota 1978-1982, NBA 1982-1993) is not widely know. And yet in high school basketball, the “Trent Tucker Rule” disallows any "catch and shoot" shot ... |
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HokiePaul, you're pretty sharp to notice that. I did that on purpose to immediately call attention to the fact that I'm talking about the high school version of the "Trent Tucker Rule", not the original NBA version. I posted about this rule several weeks ago on the Forum and there seemed to be some confusion. https://forum.officiating.com/basket...ml#post1018529 https://forum.officiating.com/basket...ml#post1018540
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"For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." (John 3:16) Last edited by BillyMac; Tue Apr 17, 2018 at 05:18pm. |
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Thanks griblets. Fixed it. A good reason to have someone else proofread one's work. I must have read that paragraph dozens of times and didn't notice that I had inadvertently deleted something.
On January 21, 2001 Iverson took the court with a tube bandage stretched over his right arm.
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"For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." (John 3:16) Last edited by BillyMac; Tue Apr 17, 2018 at 05:18pm. |
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