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Originally Posted by AremRed
Same as mine probably.
"Coach, the offensive player tried to go around the defender. From my angle it looked like the defender moved into the offensive players path while the shooter was airborne. It was close, but my initial reaction was 'block'"
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Way too many words and way too many that can be used against you ("it looked like" and "my initial reaction")
Try to keep it to five words or fewer (might not always be possible, but it will get you movign in the right direction)/
"#14 took away his landing space."