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Old Wed Dec 12, 2007, 03:10pm
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Bearfanmike20

I was SHOCKED.
look, mike, you have made some interesting and valuable contributions to this board, and I think you'll probably be an important member in the future. But you're gonna have to work on your vocabulary. This phrase, for instance, needs to fit the pattern, as follows,

I was SHOCKED! Shocked, I tell ya!

See how that flows? Nice little cliche. That's how we like it.
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