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First: As Pauley said in Goodfellas, "Hey, you popped a cherry!" Congrats.
Second: If the coach called you a $&^%* then put that he called you a $&^%*.
Third: I wouldn't say "controversal play". To me that makes it sould like there is a possibility that you screwed up...even though it appears that you didn't from your further description. I would eliminate that language.
Good job!
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