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Originally Posted by SanDiegoSteve
SA, here is today's grammar lesson:
I took (infinitive) one shot (subject) off the Wilson (adverb) that was memorable. It (pronoun for same subject, "the shot") ended up (verb) back near the mound (adverb).
Notice that the mask stayed on his face, but the ball ended up near the mound. 
I'm sure Garth will be by soon with his red pen to correct my grammatical errors! |
Better:
I (subject) took (verb - simple past) one (adj.) shot (direct object) off the Wilson (prepositional phrase) that was memorable (relative clause). It (subject) ended up (verb phrase) back (indirect object) near the mound (prepositional phrase).
Don't ask how I know.