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Old Sun May 26, 2013, 11:34pm
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Originally Posted by JRutledge View Post
I like Adam's changes. I did the same thing when I presented some of the same items. Too much wording for things that should be mostly bullet points. Unless you are writing an article these things do not need to be explained in so much detail.

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I agree, a lot of what I didn't delete could be shortened to bullets. While I appreciate the use of rule-book wording, I think it's counterproductive for the stated purpose of the document.
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