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Old Tue May 14, 2013, 09:43pm
dvboa dvboa is offline
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Originally Posted by Mark Padgett View Post
Let's see..... at 0:33 statement #2 has "restraining" misspelled, unless you really meant "restaining circle". At 0:48, a sentence appears that should have a comma between "mouth" and "step". At 0:53 the word "to" should appear before the phrase "toss the ball".

All times listed are approximate and I'll be glad to edit the rest of the video for a fee of one bagel.
Just let me know where to send the bagel! You guys are awesome!
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