Thread: Act of Shooting Doc. - Peer Review Requested
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Old Sat Dec 24, 2011, 11:54am
bob jenkins bob jenkins is offline
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Two minor wording comments:

1) Once the player "begins the motion..." s/he's no longer a dribbler

2) It's not a "double bonus."

(neither of those detracts from the message)
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