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Old Tue Sep 14, 2010, 10:27am
Mike L Mike L is offline
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Who, what, when, where.

And you should be able to describe what he did.

"He held him" is pretty lame. "He grabbed the back of the shoulder and turned him at the point of attack" is what you should be able to describe.
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