Quote:
|
Originally Posted by greymule
I doubt that's the reason. Writing always shrinks with good editing. When I edit an article for a medical journal, the text usually shrinks 10 to 15 percent. In other words, 10 pages shrink to 9 or even 8½.
|
Well, that's a medical journal which IMO is a totally different writing style. The rule book is written more like a power point presentation- with "bullets" of information.
What I'm saying is that they are making less "bullets" and not spacing the rules properly and condensing the "bullets" into long run-on sentences which are (poorly) broken up with semi-colons.
A prime example of this would be 8-4-2g in your FED book