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My version:
(Addressed to the League President),
During the fifth inning of the game between xxx and yyy earlier today xxx head coach asked for an explanation of a "catch/no catch" call. After my explanation (coach) stated "You're incompetent." I said "that's enough coach" and he replied "you're still incompetent." He was immediately ejected.
He left the immediate premises and the game was completed without further incident.
Sincerely,
Umpire's name
email address and phone number.
Original Version: 296 words/ 19.5 words per sentence
New Version: 64 words/ 12.2 words per sentence
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GB
Last edited by GarthB; Mon Jul 09, 2007 at 12:30pm.
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