Mr. Annoying Spelling Guy's friend says...
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Originally Posted by preacher316
I've read all the comments and I also have a desire to do Colligate ball. I have a family and love being home with them ; I'm a Pastor and must take care of that family as well. I'm also employed full time ( although saliried) , What are some advice and/or direction can any of you can give to help in my quest ?
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- collegiate
- salaried
- semi-colon after "them" to separate two complete thoughts
- although instead of "all though"
- either a lowercase w, or a period
- change are to is
- move can to the location of the blue can
- question mark after the sentence asking a question
Edit: Does anyone know how to use the strikeout tag in a message?
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Last edited by JugglingReferee; Fri Oct 20, 2006 at 11:33pm.
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