[CaptStevenM]

Originally posted by williebfree
Dear Trevor Behar:

I am sending this response to a recent article you wrote and circulated, “Campus Recreation in need of better-trained referees for intramural sports.” A few of my friends made me aware of your commentary. I assume your article was written in a tongue-in-cheek tone; however, it is unduly critical of a group of individuals who for the most part passionately apply their skills to provide a fair game within the rules of the game.

I have never written an article for a newspaper, but I have read many articles and columns. I mentioned this fact to offer my qualifications to judge your work as a writer. It appears that you feel these “qualifications” are sufficient enough to provide a basis for judgment of basketball officials.

Let’s take a look at your first paragraph…
It's a never-ending struggle during the life of a referee. He's trained to call it as he sees it – (C’mon Writer!!! Write it both ways!!! Women officiate too!! How can you make a statement like that? You Suck!!! ) - not making calls favoring one team or the other, being completely unbiased in all ways.


Having re-read your paragraph with my inserted comments might allow you to understand the abuse an official tolerates during the course of their work. Additionally, keep in mind, as a writer, you are afforded the opportunity to proofread your work before it is presented to the public. This is not an option for an official.

I am interested in what you think of my observations. By the way, I have a few follow-up story suggestions…. Interview (as impartially as you can) some of the IM referees, or volunteer to participate in a training session. I can tell you, without reservation, that it will be an eye-opener.


Respectfully,

State-certified sports official, 7 years

Your letter made today's paper. The published it in the letter's to the editor section. I'll let you guys know if any other letters make the paper.