Quote:
Originally Posted by BillyMac
Thanks for taking the time to help. I will consider many of your quality edits in my final draft.
I always confuse e.g. and i.e.
See edits at the top of the thread.
|
The revised version is pretty dang good. There are a few typos (sift -> soft) and a couple places where i would remove a comma, but that's looking like a nice article.
Happy to help.
__________________
Powder blue since 1998. Longtime forum lurker.
Umpiring Goals: Call the knee strike accurately (getting the low pitch since 2017)/NCAA D1 postseason/ISF-WBSC Certification/Nat'l Indicator Fraternity(completed)
"I'm gonna call it ASA for the foreseeable future. You all know what I mean."
|