Playoff scoldings from B. Mauer

[jTheUmp]

Consistency is fine, but some of the comments rub me the wrong way. For example:

Attitude: Restricted Area not enforced in the 1st half. Observer discussed it at halftime. Then the official did not enforce the RA the 2nd half. Think about these ramifications – a Pretender?

No problem with the substance of the comment, but the writing style just seems... weird. Why not say something like this:

During one game observed last weekend, the officials were not enforcing the restricted area as defined by rule. The observer discussed this with the crew at halftime, but the restricted area was not enforced in the second half either. The restricted area must be enforced for the safety of the officiating crew and the safety of the bench/sideline personnel.