Let me know what you think

[JRutledge]

I think the information is basically good. I think that you should reduce the amount of information that is on some of the slides. It is better if you are giving the presentation to talk about the minute points rather than have them all on the same screen at once. You should add a slide or two for some of those early information. Or cut out some of the bullet points all together and just talk about that information.

Now if this is something that others will have access to, then it might be OK, but I would still like to see less information.

I have for the last several years done several presentations and I learned that if you want to hold the attention of the people, you need to not have so much for them to read. You need to talk and describe many of your points.

Peace