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In Conclusion ...
The article seemed to end too abruptly, so I added a concluding paragraph.
Since James Naismith invented the game of basketball and codified its rules in the late nineteenth century players have gotten taller, bigger, stronger, and faster, completely changing the way the game is played on both offense and defense. Rules have evolved over the years to provide equal opportunities between the offense and the defense, and between small players and tall players. That being said, as the game of basketball moves into the future rules must continue to evolve in response to changing player skills, and changing team tactics. In the words of Winston Churchilll, “To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often". |
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Interesting stuff. Since we're suggesting edits, the subject seems to be missing in this sentence. |
Your Trent Tucker paragraph seems odd since it doesn't follow the format of the rest. All other paragraphs start with the name of the player in the first sentence
Perhaps some intro like below would keep the paragraphs more consistent-- While most rule influencers are household names and hall of famers, Trent Tucker (Minnesota 1978-1982, NBA 1982-1993) is not widely know. And yet in high school basketball, the “Trent Tucker Rule” disallows any "catch and shoot" shot ... |
Subject And Predicate, Third Grade Stuff ...
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On January 21, 2001 Iverson took the court with a tube bandage stretched over his right arm. |
High School Version ...
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HokiePaul, you're pretty sharp to notice that. I did that on purpose to immediately call attention to the fact that I'm talking about the high school version of the "Trent Tucker Rule", not the original NBA version. I posted about this rule several weeks ago on the Forum and there seemed to be some confusion. https://forum.officiating.com/basket...ml#post1018529 https://forum.officiating.com/basket...ml#post1018540 |
It's Like They're Identical Twins ...
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Thanks for the feedback guys.
I'll be submitting this to my editor early next week so if anybody has anything else for the good of the cause, please do so this by upcoming weekend. I'm especially interested in any rule changes that I may have missed (changes associated with specific players that have trickled down to the NFHS). Note: The first two posts in this thread should have all the changes as suggested by Forum members. I've been editing these two posts "on the fly". |
The Google Is Your Friend ...
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6.2 % of female high school basketball players move on to play college basketball (NCAA I, NCAA II, NCAA III, NAIA, and JUCO). Of course, Abraham Lincoln, the highly quotable sixteenth President of the United States, famously said, "Don't believe everything that you read on the internet". And "Honest Abe" never told a lie. Remember the story about a six year old Lincoln, a hatchet, and a cherry tree? Wait. I'm being told ... Who? The president named after a state? Never mind. |
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